A thousand points of warfare

For tomorrow night's Warhammer Night, I made the following lists. I wonder how either will do. I used every point available. Boo-yah!

HQ
Ezekiel - 145pts
Chaplain - Plasma Pistol 105pts

Elites
Venerable Dreadnought - 2xTwin-linked Autocannons - 145pts

Troops
Scouts - Sniper Rifles/Vet. Sergeant - 70pts
Tactical Squad - Meltagun/Heavy Bolter/Vet. Sergeant - 170pts
Tactical Squad - 70pts

Fast Attack
Land Speeder Tempest - 110pts

Heavy Support
Predator - Twin-linked Lascannon/Heavy Bolter sponsons - 120pts
Whirlwind - 65pts

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1000pts


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HQ
Company Master - Thunder Hammer/Storm Shield/Artificer Armour - 155pts
Librarian - 65pts

Elites
Company Veterans - 2xPower Sword/2x Combat Shield/Heavy Bolter - 135pts
Company Veterans - 2xPower Sword/2x Combat Shield/Multi-Melta - 135pts
Deathwing Terminator Squad - Assault Cannon - 240pts

Troops
Tactical Squad - Vet. Sergeant - 80pts
Tactical Squad - Vet. Sergeant - 80pts

Fast Attack
Land Speeder Tempest - 110pts

Heavy Support
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1000pts